| Page | Location | PES (2009) reference | PES (2016) equivalent | Notes |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2 | Part 1, item 2, bullet 1 | A2–A12 | No change | A11 includes new A11.1, which was not referenced |
| A8.1 | No change | |||
| A8.2 | No change | |||
| A11 | No change | A11 includes new A11.1, which was not referenced | ||
| A12 | No change | |||
| Part 1, item 2, bullet 2 | B1 | No change | ||
| B6–B7 | B8–B9 | |||
| Part 1, item 2, bullet 3 | C1–C10 | C2–C10 | ||
| C12 | No change | |||
| Part 1, item 2, bullet 4 | D1–D15 | D1–D16 | (Note 1) | |
| Part 1, item 2, bullet 5 | E2 | No change | ||
| E6–E9 | E8–E11 | New E9 includes old E11, which was not referenced | ||
| E13–E14 | E14–E15 | |||
| Part 1, item 5 | B5–B7 | B7–B9 | ||
| C1–C9 | C2–C9 | |||
| C12 | No change | |||
| D8 | D11 | |||
| D11–D14 | D5–D7, D14–D15 | Assuming the new D6 is derived from the old D11 | ||
| E7–E8 | E9–E10 | New E9 includes old E11, which was not referenced | ||
| E13–E14 | E14–E15 | |||
| 3 | Bullet 4 | C10 | No change | |
| 4 | Bullet 1 | C3, D8, D11, D12, and E13 | C4, D5–D7, D11, and E14 | (Note 2) |
| 6 | Proofreading, item 1 | E6 | E8 | |
| Proofreading, item 2 | E7 | E9 | New E9 includes old E11, which was not referenced | |
| Proofreading, item 3 | E8 | E10 | ||
| Proofreading, item 4 | E9 | E11 | ||
| Proofreading, item 5 | E13 | E14 | ||
| 7 | Copy editing, item 1 | D1 | No change | |
| Copy editing, item 2 | D2 | No change | ||
| Copy editing, item 3 | D3 | No change | ||
| Copy editing, item 4 | D4 | No change | ||
| Copy editing, item 5 | D5 | D8 | ||
| Copy editing, item 6 | D6 | D9 | ||
| Copy editing, item 7 (Note 3) | D7, D14, D15 | D10, D15, D16 | ||
| Copy editing, item 8 | D8 | D11 | ||
| Copy editing, item 9 | D9 | D12 | ||
| Copy editing, item 10 | D10 | D13 | ||
| Copy editing, item 11 | D11 | D5, D6 | ||
| Copy editing, item 12 | D12 | D7 | ||
| 8 | Stylistic editing, item 1 | C1–C3 | C2–C4 | |
| Stylistic editing, item 2 | C5 | C6 | ||
| Stylistic editing, item 3 | C6–C9 | C7–C9 | ||
| Stylistic editing, item 4 | C10, C12 | No change | ||
| Structural editing, item 1 | B6 | B8 | ||
| Structural editing, item 2 | B7 | B9 | ||
| Structural editing, item 3 | A9 | No change |
Notes
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D1–D15 = D1–D4, D5, D6, D7, D8, D9, D10, D11, D12, D13, D14, D15 D1–D15 = D1'–D4', D8', D9', D10', D11', D12', D13', (D5', D6'), D7', D14', D15', D16' D1–D15 = D1'–D4', D5', D6', D7', D8', D9', D10', D11', D12', D13', D14', D15', D16' D1–D15 = D1'–D16' -
C3, D8, D11, D12, and E13 = C4', D11', (D5', D6'), D7', E14' C3, D8, D11, D12, and E13 = C4', D5', D6', D7', D11', E14' C3, D8, D11, D12, and E13 = C4', D5'–D7', D11', E14' - Item 7 appears to contain a formatting error, but there is actually none. It mentions two tasks, but the citations for the two tasks are the same.